Dandelion and Thistledown (3/4)

Feb 20, 2008 23:06

Part One Part Two Part Three Part Four

And the third part, which mostly concerns Aylili's past. Also, to all feral children, a bath must come. ^_^

Title: Dandelion and Thistledown (3/4)
Words: 5675

The moon was full and bright and she could see the shadows on its skin. Dimly, she wondered how something so scarred could shine so brightly. )

nimbus, writing, saisorhi

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shanra March 8 2008, 16:26:02 UTC
Randomly, bt I do love this line: "Also, to all feral children, a bath must come. ^_^"

“Dear Liaven. I will charm you one day.” <- *chuckles at Nimbus' flirting* I'd forgotten how chilling the history lesson this starts with actually is...

“But, dear, dear Liaven..[.]”

“No. Whatever you want. No.” <- *snickers* See what comes of trying to charm too hard those who do not wish to be charmed? ^-~

Chancellor, shall we withdraw.” <- Question mark, no?

Perhaps she shouldn’t have struggled quite so much when they put her in the bath. <- *snickers* Also, the introduction to the bath is marvellous. I love how Aylili's reaction gets reflected in the actual text.

“Good. If I have to do this more than once I’ll spike his feather oil with catnip.” <- *snickers* But you love him anyway, Liaven. Just admit it. ^-~

Frustrated, she was tempted to shake him until his feathers flew. <- Well, at least she does know what comes of stubbornly not talking to people ( ... )

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rosiphelee September 20 2008, 19:51:43 UTC
The Light is pretty ruthless.

Nimbus is such a flirt, even when it's completely unwelcome. ^_^

Poor Aylili. Baths are such a shock.

*would love to see Nimbus pursued by cats*

*hugs Nimbus* Face to face with his worst nightmares there, poor thing.

*hugs* Thank you.

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