Dandelion and Thistledown (4/4)

[rosiphelee]

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Title: Dandelion and Thistledown (4/4)
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[shanra]

Ach! Now I remember what I've confused this with. Wallflower and Juniper, that's the Nimbus and Aylili story you'd not finished. *facepalms* I feel utterly silly now.

What did he think he had been doing for the last six months? <- *giggle* Touché. But still... It's easy to see Nimbus' side of it as well, poor thing.

She wanted to hate him[,] but when she looked at him all she could see was an old man with tired eyes. <- *sniffles some more* Aylili is a wonderful character, she really is.

“He’s worried about you,” Liaven said. “Caring gives us the right to worry.” <- *sniffs more* 's Not right, this. 's the way it is, but it's not right.

The wind must have gusted as she leapt for she was carried further than she expected and stumbled on landing. <- I love how you've woven the wings in there and she's just not noticing them yet. That's wonderful.

She didn’t see how he could have known[,] but she had learnt not to make assumptions. <- Daft creature. ^-^ That's so lovely, though, when she can finally fly. The fever and the pain was

[rosiphelee]

Ah. That would make sense, as W&J follows on quite closely.

Aylili might not say much, but she's got a lovely sarcastic train of thought.

She also sees things with a certain clarity. She's almost, but not quite, an outsider in this society.

*grins* Unrealistic for a fledging, but fun.

I think it should have been 'had managed to get'

I wanted to make a point of how rough her voice would be.

Nimbus is trying to teach her how to face danger in style ^_^

It had to end with healing, after all that.

Thank you so much for rereading this and commenting. I'm sorry to be so slow replying.