Comments | rot_chan: Shisui, Itachi One-Shot: "Try, Try Again"

rot_chan

Shisui, Itachi One-Shot: "Try, Try Again"

May 14, 2011 00:44

Title: Try, Try Again
Author: Rot-chan
Characters: young!Shisui and little!Itachi
Genre: Humor/Friendship
Summary: As Shisui put another brick on the bridge, Itachi wasn’t sure if he'd really succeed; after all, for half of the project he’d been either secretly playing his PSP underneath the desk or taking a nap. (Nice way to use your Gifted class time ( Read more... )

humor, naruto, itachi, fanfiction, uchiha, shisui

Comments 6

moldycookies May 14 2011, 15:32:20 UTC

Ahahahahahaha! lol. XD Your icon and this was sooooo adorbs. <3

rot_chan May 14 2011, 19:56:05 UTC

Aww, thanks hun! I'm glad you found the story (and my icon) funny and cute :D

critique [1/1] aestover May 25 2011, 14:25:20 UTC

Ahaha ( ... )

Re: critique [1/1] rot_chan May 27 2011, 02:55:35 UTC

Thank you for the excellent, detailed critique! 8') I really appreciate you taking time to write such a wonderful review of my fiction.

I've always wondered how to characterize Shisui. Usually with canon fiction, I make him more rebellious and open than Itachi to sort of contrast the two, but still very serious and guarded when it comes to being a ninja and part of the police force. AU fiction is fun because I can make him a smart slacker, and sometimes really popular, LOL ;D

I'm glad you like Hiraki-sensei! ;') I wasn't quite sure about adding a teacher as a main part of the fic, but in the end I came to like her. I gave her similar glasses to mine, ha-ha.

Thanks again dear! ♥

weisquared June 6 2011, 15:58:48 UTC

(here from write-dattebayo ( ... )

rot_chan June 7 2011, 00:59:49 UTC

Thanks for the critique dear! I'm happy that this OS turned out well and I wrote kid Shisui and Itachi really well too :) I'm glad you like the details too...I just love adding little things to make my story unique and I appreciate that you noticed :D Also, I like how everybody loves Miss Hiraki. I created a teacher I actually wished I could've had in RL.

LOL yes, it was like a little joke. I have always sucked at astronomy and actually went throughout much of my life thinking Orion was O'Ryan for some unknown reason, and mispronounced various other star/zodiac names (see Saggetarus for Sagittarius, hee). Whoever taught me elementary science isn't a good teacher, LOL. But you're right, I should have probably added a few more instances where Shisui was a know-it-all, and gets it wrong, that would've been cute, haha ID Also, thanks for pointing out my grammatical errors!