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This is a story I started for a NANO several long years ago. I actually think its one of my best works, Prophecies and Names aside. I've been struggling to return to it because I would love to see it finished. And ultimately I may try to get it published though that may just be a pipe dream

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I'll look at the "unnecessary big words" issue, but really its just how I write. I think it would be harder to mentally edit them out than to keep writing them. Though if I've got a bad case of Tolkenism then I'd like to know. (The man described blades of grass, I swear. Made his stuff dry and very hard to read. Then again, Robert Jordon would expound for pages on the details on clothing and I feel I'm no where as crazy as either of those two.) But I will definitely take it under consideration and try to determine if I've gone crazy with my flavor text.

I'll edit the beginning and see what I can do about the name issue. I don't want it to be confusing. I'm glad I had you read it, sometimes its hard to get good feedback from people who have heard me talk about it or helped with it in the past because they already know the characters.

Thank you. I really appreciate you taking the time out of your schedule to read it. I'll post another chapter in a few days. After I've looked into the name issue this weekend.