"honey is sweeter than blood." - uruha/ruki - 1/1.

Mar 21, 2010 19:58

honey is sweeter than blood
uruha/ruki, pg-13.
their relationship is: good, bad, ugly. sometimes, the lines between the three are clear cut. sometimes, the lines blur.

And Ruki opens the door. Uruha comes to him. )

uruha/ruki, gazette

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pandesal_luv March 21 2010, 19:31:47 UTC
Awwwwww~ That was so touching. (;___;)
I loved the way you structured it and how you described their relationship. So simple yet so complicated...it's beautiful...<3

Thank you for this!~ ^^

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gaussianblur89 March 21 2010, 19:52:52 UTC
This is so manys of perfect. Simply wonderful.

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n3uromanc3r March 21 2010, 20:06:27 UTC
I always enjoy how you portray the relationship of those two, I really liked the atmosphere you created around them!

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fonulyn March 21 2010, 20:28:53 UTC
I don't know what made me click on the link but I'm glad I did :) This had the perfect slow pace to make it feel right, to make it feel like it was a black and white movie that was just rolling past. I like your short sentences and the way you build the story, the whole structure of it. Was a very enjoyable read! And made me want to write, too.

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maunetjeret March 22 2010, 02:22:36 UTC
I really really liked this. They way it flowed and all...

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