Show me a new state line, and I'll show you what I meant to say. We're going 70 miles per hour over a long long bridge, and explain to me where the river beneath us went. I'll wrap this bridge around the world, shape it into a mobius strip, if it would just get you to speak again. Tell me where we're going, and I'll tell you why I lied.
This part, with the two part sentences, is really working. Nice. I don't know if it is just my eyes and the time of night, but the first sentence didn't catch me.. I kept skipping to "Six"
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This part, with the two part sentences, is really working. Nice. I don't know if it is just my eyes and the time of night, but the first sentence didn't catch me.. I kept skipping to "Six"
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