Titles #37 "Crumbling Walls"

[rovingseaturtle]

Crumbling Walls

Comments

[randomlanguage]

Right now, the last line almost feels too summarizing. As if there hasn't been enough space between the first and last line to warrant that much of a summary. .. It might work if you changed the order of some of the sentences... not sure

[rovingseaturtle]

Yeah, I know. I'm terrible at last lines.