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Oct 06, 2010 02:48
Hey. I'm still here. Still writing, for whatever that's worth. Hey (
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randomlanguage
October 9 2010, 01:45:01 UTC
Yay! You exist!
Nice description and repetition of images.
One part I got stuck on was "straight with a clack onto the opposite shore" I couldn't think why it clacked.
After I thought a bit I thought it might be a cobblestone shore?
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Nice description and repetition of images.
One part I got stuck on was "straight with a clack onto the opposite shore" I couldn't think why it clacked.
After I thought a bit I thought it might be a cobblestone shore?
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