This is so sweet. I love it. It's very natural and feels very much like Bill and Laura. Oh to see this on the show. Sad to see it'll be ending. Thank you for sharing.
I love this story, I'm so glad you updated! I love the heated tension at the end. Ah, you're so evil! I love how you prolong it, but I'm getting anxious for some smut, or something close to it. ;] But great story so far. It's such a realistic situation.
She touched her lips, eyes fastened on his. "Lipstick," she warned. *heeheehee* *picturing Bill with Laura's lipstick* *squeeeee*
I could read on for ages. Are you sure that you didn't mean to write 3/14? *begs* They are so cute with each other the way you write them *sighs...is-happy-with-the-way-the-story-goes* But of course, if you should decide to take the story towards a little bit of (soft?)smut, I wouldn't exactly object, either *smirk*
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This made me LOL! I love them getting caught making out, it's so cute :P Can't wait for the next bit... then I'll just read it all again.
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*heeheehee* *picturing Bill with Laura's lipstick* *squeeeee*
I could read on for ages. Are you sure that you didn't mean to write 3/14? *begs*
They are so cute with each other the way you write them *sighs...is-happy-with-the-way-the-story-goes*
But of course, if you should decide to take the story towards a little bit of (soft?)smut, I wouldn't exactly object, either *smirk*
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