SV fic: I GotYour Man (and you can't do anything)

[roxymissrose]

Title: I GotYour Man(and you can't do anything)
Fandom:SV
Pairing: Clark/Whit
Word Count: 2502
Rating: R
Summary: just the merest smidgeon of porn, and the teeniest sprinkle of silly plot

Comments

[rednihilist]

OMFG, I was just heading to beddy-bye when the lj announcement thing-y popped up about you updating. (Yeah, that's how tired I am cos that previous sentence? SO concise, and didn't take me like ten tries to get right. *rolls eyes*)

Anyway, I pounced on this like a-- a Bengal tiger! I leapt for it. *snorfle*

And what killed me so bad that I dropped my head down on the desk and commenced laughing until I drooled (TMI? Too bad! *cackle*)? This, right here: He glanced at his hands, tight as vise grips on the wheel. His hands were softer than they'd ever been...And then I get through it, right? I pull myself together, and what comes next? Clark and Whit and the Moment Of Insane Awkward Embarrassment! GOD. You kill me. I can't go to sleep now cos I can't stop laughing! DAMN you, woman. (But really, thank you SO freakin' muchly

[jlvsclrk]

Agh, Whitney, you're blowing it! I loved the scene with Whitney buying the candy and winding up with condoms, just in case. And then Clark drives off with Lex? And then things just keep getting worse, don't they?

Hmmm, this thing really does need a title doesn't it? I'd go with something like "That all changed" or something that reflects this paragraph:

Yeah, it would've been sweet, but that all changed. Whit lost everything he'd planned. It all poured through his hands like water-he'd fucked up his scholarship, Dad fucked him up by dying, service fucked up his leg and lost him mall hope of football, the Marines-all fucked up. And now…fuck everything he'd ever thought he wanted. There was on thing he hoped to salvage out of all that. All he needed was that one thing.

Brilliant writing!

[rosy5000]

This just made my night sooooooo much better!!!! :D

Awww!! Whit bought Clark candy. Too bad they didn't get to share it and test the M&M's "melt in your mouth" theory. Maybe soon. ;)

ACK! I can't believe you have me wanting Clark to be with Whitney more than Lex! Probably no chance of a threesome, eh? *puppy eyes* I can always hope. hehe

*giggles* Oh Clark... you always know how to make an embarrassing situation worse, don't you. And Whit... he's just putting his foot in his mouth. These boys so need to get on the same page! *smooshes them together*

[theclexfactor]

You're killing me. It's a good death, but poor misunderstood boys. By the way, I love the way you write dialogue. You make them sound like real boys instead of the overly let-me-show-you-how-many-big-words-I-know way that many other authors do. High school students can be intelligent, but damn they shouldn't sound like they have 3 PhDs.

So yeah, I need another one.

[megamom2]