The Lie of Omission for brighty18

Jun 05, 2009 17:55

For a number of reasons, this turned into a bit of a rush job. I'll probably edit this up a bit before I post it anywhere else, but I wanted to get this up before the deadline.

Title: The Lie of Omission
Author: Curley Green (yndigot)
Rating: PG
Word Count: ~1000
Challenge: For brighty18. Keywords: safe, loved, home. Dialogue: "I'm here." It came out very ( Read more... )

may 2009, 500-1000 words, rated pg

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marauderthesn June 8 2009, 00:57:41 UTC
I like this a lot; I think it's very realistic that Sirius would worry that there would be a limit when it comes to how much the Potters will tolerate from him. I also really like the little detail of Sirius pressing his finger against Remus's lips. Nice job. :)

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yndigot June 8 2009, 01:09:13 UTC
Oh thank you. ^_^ I'm so glad you liked it.

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