Comments | rs_500: Not As Good As Naked Quidditch for <strong class="lj-user"><a href="/read/user/brighty18">brighty18</a></strong> (March 2009 Pinch Hit)

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Not As Good As Naked Quidditch for brighty18 (March 2009 Pinch Hit)

Jun 28, 2009 23:20

Title: Not As Good As Naked Quidditch
Author: Curley Green (yndigot)
Rating: PG-13 for a rude word and sexual banter
Word Count: ~600
Challenge: For brighty18. Keywords: rainbow, goat, cotton candy. Dialogue: "Boredom, like hell, is not easily conquered."
Summary: Sirius thinks he has better things to do with his time than follow Remus around a silly carnival ( Read more... )

500-1000 words, march 2009, rated pg-13

Comments 14

remuslives23 June 29 2009, 09:21:17 UTC

Cute and funny! Love it, hon. :)

yndigot June 29 2009, 16:22:39 UTC

Thank you! ^_^

cherie_morte June 29 2009, 09:24:49 UTC

lolololol

"Buy me some candy floss and I'll let you ride my Tunnel of Love later."

Oh, Remus. Stick to quoting muggles. *shakes head*

This was adorable. I loved the ending, your banter was just so *them*.

yndigot June 29 2009, 16:21:53 UTC

That really was a horrifically cheesy line. ^_^ I'm glad you enjoyed it!

thesiriusmoon June 29 2009, 11:37:17 UTC

This was adorable :D I do love happily bantering puppies. Good job!

yndigot June 29 2009, 17:38:18 UTC

Aww! Thank you!

Two for One and Totally Worth It! brighty18 June 29 2009, 17:10:31 UTC

THANK YOU!!!

OMG! This was funny. And bless you (and Remus and Sirius) for getting the corruption of Thomas Paine. I do so like it when they are witty and intelligent.

And speaking of witty and intelligent, this while THING was witty and intelligent. "It's sad, really, how you think quoting dead muggles is sexy." LOL

And want to know something weird? I once wrote an R/S fic with goats and that was essentially, the first line I used, too. Strange! Goats do have funky eyeballs. I'm used to it now, but it still weirds out my friend wolfiekins.

I feel awful because for the first time EVER, my story is not ready yet!

Re: Two for One and Totally Worth It! yndigot June 29 2009, 18:06:23 UTC

I'm glad you liked it! It was fun to write. I'm a history buff, so I couldn't resist Thomas Paine. ^_^

I'm also a total a city girl. I know nothing about goats except that their eyes freak me out hard-core. *hides from the goats*

There's still a few days before the stories are due! My non-pinch hit for this month still needs a bit of work too...

Re: Two for One and Totally Worth It! brighty18 June 29 2009, 19:42:04 UTC

I spent most of life as a total city-girl, but now I have a farm, so you never know!

This just feels strange because it's usually me on time and doing pinch hits. Perhaps rs_games might have something to so with it. June was a tough month!

Re: Two for One and Totally Worth It! yndigot June 29 2009, 20:20:33 UTC

*laughs at the idea of me on a farm*

rs_games are so totally worth you running a little late. I'm sure it's a lot of work, but I know I'm super excited. You modly types are very impressive.

ladyannikaa July 1 2009, 14:00:26 UTC

Aww! Loved it!! So cute and funny!

yndigot July 1 2009, 20:04:52 UTC

Thank you!