Release for a_shadow_there (August 2009 Late Entry)

[yndigot]

Title: Release
Author: Curley Green (yndigot)
Rating: R
Word Count: ~500
Challenge: For a_shadow_there. Keywords: burst, ocean, tremble. Dialogue: "...well?"
Summary: The moons when Remus is already tense and anxious are invariably the worst.
AN: It's been a rough couple months. This is a month late and perhaps not everything it could be. But it's sexier than

Comments

[a_shadow_there]

Awww! That's so sweet. I do so love the image of them sitting together in a bath, all soft and wet and moulded against one another.

I also really like the image of Sirius peeling the bloody sheet away from Remus. I'm not sure why, to be honest. It's certainly very vivid though!

Thank you, this is a lovely piece. Think I might have to read it again :)

xxx

[yndigot]

! I've been quite distracted with life and the rs_games and not had a chance to look back here. I'm so glad you liked it. It ended up being very short and image-based, which is quite different from my usual dialogue-based style. I'm glad there were images that worked for you! Thanks!

[duck_or_rabbit]

I think you do sexy very lovely and subtly. It's my favorite style, actually.

This description is perfect for transformation, I think: His bones had the deep ache that came from being snapped and reformed and his muscles were tender from being pulled to fit a different body.

It makes me shutter, but that's because you've described it realistically. Or how we could easily imagining it having happened.

♥

[yndigot]

Oh thank you! I don't usually write sex acts out at all in any capacity -- I'm more of a 'fade to black' sort. And I usually feel like the things I write are very dialogue-driven. This turned into something quite different and I'm glad it worked.