Day 29 - Fic: Team Place: The Kitchen Disaster

[rsgamesmods]

Team: Place

Title: The Kitchen Disaster

Rating: PG

Warnings: None

Word Count: 3300

Summary: Sirius is hungry, and there is nothing in the cupboards fit to eat. There is no way that this could go wrong, none at all.

Prompt: #22 - Picture of a British pantry from the 1970s.

Comments

[museinabsentia]

All right, this was just the bright spot my day needed. Not only was it both hilarious and sweet, but just sort of brilliant. I mean, it has annotations at the end. I'm sort of in love (and would really rather like to read the story about them charming the stones bright pink.) I just loved how sort of resigned Remus was to the whole thing, and yet, he still came across as incredibly fond. It was just lovely. The whole thing was just lovely.

[remuslives23]

Excellent! Loved it.

[mommyconk]

Adorable! Love the bundled up lump!

[bookgrrrl2006]

lol. without a doubt, that made my morning. disgusting as it was (even instant coffee is pretty disgusting and "weird little flakes" certainly describes it perfectly), it somehow made me hungry. maybe sirius's hunger is contagious? who knows?

seriously, though, this was absolutely adorable and funny, funny, funny. i loved remus-as-a-lump and sirius's earnest attempts at cooking. you captured well the roommate/lover bond and even managed to make it extremely amusing. good job, you!

[sub_etheric]

That was joyful throughout, but it was the sudden addition of the tinned salmon that really got me, ahahaha :D The two of them accidentally on purpose achieving picturesque shabbiness in their flat fits them perfectly, and the sentient Hogwarts stones deciding it was the best idea to turn themselves pink seems only right!