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In the Blink of an Eye

Jan 05, 2010 16:15

Title: In the Blink of an Eye
Author: rslworks
Prompt: Sick!Wilson fest, Round 4 - Wilson gets hit in the eye with a champagne cork at a hospital Christmas party, and the full extent of the damage could show up right away, or a few days later.
Pairing: none
Category: accident
Rating/Warnings: PG-13, I think
Words: 3947
Summary: See prompt
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round 4

Comments 27

menolly_au January 6 2010, 20:27:32 UTC

That was great. I love House when he's being all doctorly. Don't think I would like to be blind while he's around though...Cringe at the idea of a large needle going anywhere near my eye..

rslworks January 6 2010, 22:48:07 UTC

Thanks so much for taking time to comment. Glad you liked it!

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rslworks January 6 2010, 22:49:34 UTC

Really appreciate your opinion, as always. I was going to inject more humor but it was getting so long! Thanks for reading!

anotherfngrl January 14 2010, 06:52:18 UTC

Wow, this is a really great fic. The thing that really makes a fic great instead of just interesting to me, in this fandom, is a real understanding of the medical situation, and you did a great job with that. And with the characters. Wilson was awesome in this- just the way I love seeing him, strong and amazing and a little bit evil, not to mention the center of House's world. Great job!

rslworks January 14 2010, 12:09:48 UTC

Thanks so much for your comments. Wilson is strong, isn't he? I don't care for fics that make him snivelling and whiny. Thank you for appreciating what I was trying to do!

leoraine January 20 2010, 09:25:52 UTC

Love the ending. House is corrupting Wilson. How surprising, lol. Though I like you keeping the medical facts straight, I had to skip them, was just eating and I'm a little squeemish about eyes and needles in one sentence, lol. Good job and really waiting for the next fic.

rslworks January 20 2010, 11:10:30 UTC

Thanks so much. That's so sweet of you. (Sorry about the icky parts) Nothing in the works right now, but when the muse hits or sickwilson fest looms, I'll be there!

xgraciela January 22 2010, 00:45:53 UTC

Extra late reply - blame my uni for that :(

I love your fic! Nice and very realistic. Also, great dialougue. Exactly what the sick!Wilson-fan ordered! *g*

rslworks January 22 2010, 11:13:31 UTC

Late doesn't matter...I'm so glad you liked it! Many thanks!! One of these days I'm going to do an all dialog fic. House fans know these two well enough to picture it.