Colored Lenses [Yesung/Siwon, PG-13]

Sep 08, 2012 01:20

Title: Colored Lenses
Pairing: Yesung/Siwon
Rating: PG-13
Genre: AU, General, Romance
Length: one-shot
Disclaimer: I don't own any of them, SME does. Plot is mine.
Summary: To Siwon, the world is linear. To Yesung, the world is anything but.

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c: siwon, pairing: yesung/siwon, c: yesung

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tinyscribbles80 September 8 2012, 08:50:29 UTC
Yesung and Shiwon aren't really my thing either but this is extremely nice ^^ thanks for posting!

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rssj1314 September 8 2012, 09:44:01 UTC
aw, thank you! i'm glad you survived through this and all of the errors, then! ^_^ thank you for commenting! I'm happy that you liked this~

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suju_addict September 8 2012, 15:58:04 UTC
Are u serious? Ur not a yewon shipper & u manage to write this awesome piece of work? I LOVED IT LOVED LOVED IT LOVED IT so freakin much.. Its amazing.. the way u made them.express such complicated emotions.. mixed up ones.. Its just beautiful.. Thanks alot author..really thanks :')

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rssj1314 September 9 2012, 02:47:11 UTC
:3 I'm glad you liked it! thank you for your encouragement!

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rssj1314 September 9 2012, 02:48:43 UTC
You don't have to thank me! You totally deserved this, Yera, because you're always there when I want to talk ^_^ even though I'm hardly ever around. You are amazing and I wish I could have given you something better than this. I'm really happy that you like this story though, even if it's short and not very detailed.

Always be proud of yourself! ily ♥

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kendayawind September 8 2012, 16:16:11 UTC
Spot!

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"Perhaps Siwon doesn’t realize he’s never loved before.

Maybe Yesung has loved all along." <- My favorite exchange between them.

I don't read Yewon, and I don't usually cause they're just not my particular cup of tea, but this was amazing. I loved it, and for the ultimate time, I felt as if I really could get into this pairing because your writing draws me into them! And dang (it is hard to write Siwon, but yours came out wonderfully :D)

<3 Nyx

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rssj1314 September 9 2012, 02:50:00 UTC
LOL. You were the last person I expected to read this. What are you doing reading, anyways? Shouldn't you be spending time with your family? But I guess I'm glad you were able to enjoy this... this took me DAYS to write and Siwon still came out weird, in my opinion. =/ Anyhow, thanks!

♥ Lien

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kendayawind September 9 2012, 04:32:49 UTC
I did :D But I had some free time since they were all eating and I was waiting to be fed, so checked livejournal and lo and behold~ (And right now, just rented them the Hunger Games so they're distracted by that) At least you got writing done, I'm proud ^o^

Luck is just not on my side.

I actually really liked your Siwon o.o, I was able to read this as a story itself rather than "omg, can I do this pairing?" mentality. So, therefore, I'm happy ^^.

Remember to take vitamins!

<3 Nyx

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niayesungie September 8 2012, 16:59:04 UTC
“You’re not used to being with anyone,” he emphasizes, “because you’ve only ever been with yourself, in your mind.”

“What I don’t know is just as hazardous as danger itself.”

“You see the world at a flat perspective. Everything and everyone is the same to you. Towards me, you seem to have a filter in your system-you are extra cautious, extra careful, extra gentle, but you hide yourself.”

you wrote so many gorgeous quotes girl... and idk, somehow all of them, and Siwon in this fic, fits me to the core that i feel shocked. no this is not a fail or something synonimous. as a yewon writer myself i can't love this fic more. i really like the way you write this. short but all the words and sentences are really effective, as in full of meaning. no filler.
great job!^^

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rssj1314 September 9 2012, 02:50:58 UTC
I'm so happy that you could relate to this! I honestly don't feel as though anything in this story of mine is as significant as you give it credit for, but as long as you had a good time reading it, I'm happy! Thank you!

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