[TC/012] Flames To A Fire [Chen/Lay, PG-13]

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Title: Flames To A Fire
Pairing: Chen/Lay
Rating: PG-13
Genre: AU, General/Romance
Length: one-shot
Disclaimer: I don't own any of them, SME does. Plot is mine.
Summary: There is no light bright enough for this darkness, and they find a spark that leads them down the wrong path- the only "right" path for them, to be honest.

Comments

[rssj1314]

Spot for Nyx♥

[galbijiim]

Is it bad that when I read Yixing cornering Jongdae into a wall I thought of this?

I'm sorry. BUT OTHERWISE. Ahhhh I loveeeeee ChenLay and while I don't really understand all the tension in the story it was HOT when Yixing shoved Jongdae into the wall anyways.

" Yixing smirks when Jongdae parts his lips with no words to speak and, in the blink of an eye, he crashes forward and weaves one hand through Jongdae’s hair. No matter how much Jongdae resists, thrashes and tries to shove him off, Yixing doesn’t give in, only tugging back on Jongdae’s hair and pushing him up harder against the wall."

LIKE REALLY HOT. Like oh I like this type of Yixing, I want to see more ; D;. But sounds like going towards a darker end...d...

[rssj1314]

Haha. I don't even know what that is but it looks funny. I'm glad you had fun with the intimacy, lol. It definitely was geared towards a darker conclusion, which is why I stopped myself! lol. Anyhow, thank you for commenting~!! :3

[nmiall]

feedback from 2016 :>
the contrast details (hot and cold) in this kept me alive, with just a spark from a match and you can ignite all fire in this cold night :> "let me take you away" gives me goosebumps ugh i dont know i like how you write yixing in this even it was a bit harsh from everything i have about yixing in my head :3 this was good, wish it was longer somehow, i know you can do better but this is very nice anyway :) can i translate it into vietnamese? :> btw thank you for writing this <3