LJ Idol 10: Week 7: Where I'm From

[rswndrlst]

Stories About the Jersey Devil

You're three thousand miles away from where you want to be so you decide to get drunk.

You wander through the back-streets and back-alleys of San Francisco with the bottle in one hand and the stub of a joint clutched between thumb and forefinger of the other.

You circle the blocks not really paying attention to your

Comments

[adoptedwriter]

I enjoyed this so much!

[rswndrlst]

Yay! Thank you!

[kajel]

Wow, this was wonderful.

[rswndrlst]

Thank you so much!

[morettaallstar]

Hooked by the first line - a great opener.
Well done!

[rswndrlst]

thank you! this is such great feedback!

[j0ydivided]

This is gorgeous. Well done.

[halfshellvenus]

I really liked this, both the outer story and the story-within-the-story, and the way in which communication doesn't always convey what we mean, but sometimes we still know what we feel.