Favorite Things

Apr 02, 2008 23:06

Title: Nymphadora's Favorite Things
Author: Merryb87
Rating & Word Count: Heavy R; 248
Prompt: #8:Sex contains all...
Summary: Tonks thought there was nothing better than kissing Remus Lupin
Warnings: Implied sex, but not graphic. Perhaps some run-ons. Sorry folks, it's not happy/funny like my last one.

Notes: For sure my last entry in this fic-a ( Read more... )

merryb87, prompt 8

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sugarannie April 3 2008, 06:50:04 UTC
This is going to be a very uncreative comment...but I just wanted to say that this is such a sweet little story. I really like the last sentence:-)

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merryb87 April 3 2008, 07:13:16 UTC
I've learned that I'm really good at last sentences...XD

Thank you so much for reading and commenting, I'm glad you liked it.

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rainsoulx April 4 2008, 07:40:55 UTC
Yes, you really are good in last sentences, ^_^.

But my favourite is this one: " to whisper sweet nothings in her ear."

I'm charmed by the use of 'nothing': it would be odd in my language, but it sounds so good in english!

I liked it!

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belladonna1986 April 5 2008, 16:10:54 UTC
I suppose it has already been mentioned, but the last sentence is great and intense, it does the ficlet justice, as well as the built up of climax.
Great piece!

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