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rtruffles

The Long and Winding Road 30/?

Jan 09, 2011 19:37

Title: The Long and Winding Road

Pairing: Luke and Reid

Other Characters: Many Oakdaleites

Summary: This is the story about the courtship of Luke and Reid.

This is story is AU, as Reid is very much alive. Katie and Chris are not together.

Rating: PG 14 for language. The F bomb has been dropped.

A/N: This is the end for Chris. I hope that you like it.

( Chapter 30 )

lure my fic rated pg14

Comments 25

sleeper6 January 10 2011, 03:56:57 UTC

Fantastic! Absolutely fantastic. Chris is gone!!! Finally he realized that no one wants him around as COS. Dusty and his kick! LOL!

And Reid thanking Luke in front of everyone is so awesome, really. I loved it all!

rtruffles January 10 2011, 04:07:14 UTC

Thank you so much!!!

Chris is most definitely gone!!!

When I started adding in all of those characters I thought it would be really funny to have Dusty kick Chris!!

I'm so glad that you liked this chapter.
Thanks for all of your great feedback!

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rtruffles January 10 2011, 16:39:08 UTC

Thank you so much for reading!

As soon as I put all of those Oakdaleites into the story I knew that I wanted to have Dusty throw a roundhouse kick! Lol

I'm glad that you liked it!

marsabi January 10 2011, 04:12:53 UTC

LOl! Loved Paul and Dusty -too funny! And of course, so happy to have Chris going away. He actually sounded a little frightening there; I hope Reid and Luek are safe from him and his delusions for a long time!Glad you wrote he won't be back!
And aww, so sweet with Reid's speech. He is so honest and refreshing with his I love you. Fantastic job!

rtruffles January 10 2011, 16:40:34 UTC

Thanks!
Chris is scary!! He definitely won't be back!!!

I'm glad that you liked what Reid added to his speech!

csigeekfan January 10 2011, 04:17:00 UTC

OMG. I loved Chris's downfall. Absolutely loved it.

And I actually got all giddy when Reid announced that he loved Luke. Wonderful. I can't wait to read more about Bob's retirement party.

This story has been TONS of fun to follow. :)

rtruffles January 10 2011, 16:42:46 UTC

Thanks!

I'm glad that you liked Chris's downfall!

I'm also glad that you're not sick of Bob's retirement party. I thought that it would be over in one chapter and I'm hoping that I finish it in the third! *sigh*

Thanks so much for reading and for all of your great feedback!

reilaroo January 10 2011, 04:55:15 UTC

Love this chapter! Chris has really gone off the deep end. I'm glad he's off to the looney bin.

I had to stop reading when I got to the part with Dusty and his roundhouse kick. I was laughing so hard I was crying and had trouble seeing the screen. That part was hilarious. So good.

I'm looking forward to the next chapter. I'm very curious about Chris's dossier on Reid.

Oh, I loved how Reid thanked Luke and announced he loved him in front of everybody. I can't wait to see Noah's reaction to that. Hopefully, it will send him over the deep end too and he'll soon be joining Chris at Deerbrooke.

rtruffles January 10 2011, 16:45:57 UTC

Thanks for reading!

I really wanted to have Dusty throw a roundhouse kick at Chris!! I'm so glad that it made you laugh!!

The dossier won't be in the next chapter, it will be in the one after the party is over!

I do have a plan for Noah, but I hadn't thought of having him join Chris. We'll see what happens!