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rtruffles

The Long and Winding Road 34/?

Feb 03, 2011 09:29

Title: The Long and Winding Road

Pairing: Luke and Reid

Other characters: Henry and Noah.

Summary: This is a story about the courtship of Luke and Reid. This story is AU.

Disclaimer: These are not my characters. They all belong to ATWT and its parent company(ies). All mistakes are mine.

Rating: PG

Warning: There is a lot of Noah in this chapter! Sorry ( Read more... )

lure my fic rated pg

Comments 24

shar_jere February 3 2011, 19:46:33 UTC

Um okay... he has officially lost his mind

rtruffles February 3 2011, 23:28:30 UTC

Thanks for reading!

He has lost his mind, or perhaps it's just me. LOL

gypsiesheart February 3 2011, 22:18:29 UTC

I always love it when Luke giggles in a story. It makes me giggle too! =)

So proud of Reid for defending Luke and I'm proud of Luke for standing up to Noah. Ugh...he is truly the king of the clueless idiots!

rtruffles February 3 2011, 23:31:56 UTC

Thanks for reading!! Giggling Luke always makes me smile!

I really wanted both of them to stand up to Noah. (Noah is very thick and needs to hear things maaaannny times! ) LOL

reilaroo February 3 2011, 22:50:36 UTC

Great chapter. I'm sad to learn that this story is almost over. Its one of my favorites.

Noah is so delusional. Not only is he hurting himself, he's hurting Luke too. I don't care if he hurts himself, but he's not allowed to hurt Luke. I was so glad that Reid defended Luke. It just shows how much better Reid is for Luke than Noah. All Noah did was belittle and judge Luke, while Reid encourages and praises Luke.

I'm looking forward to Noah's going away party. I can't wait to read the next chapter.

Again, wonderful chapter. Plus, Henry was awesome as usual.

rtruffles February 3 2011, 23:37:06 UTC

Thanks for reading! I'm so glad that you are enjoying this story. I do have a sequel planned. I really suck at endings! LOL.

ITA that all Noah did was judge and belittle Luke. I really hated that!

I wanted Reid to defend Luke and I also really wanted Luke to stand up for himself. I think that Noah will always make Luke feel insecure, but Reid will always build him up!

I'm glad that you liked Henry. I wish we had had more scenes with Reid and Henry on the show!

traciamc February 4 2011, 00:20:49 UTC

This cracked me up:

Luke felt a migraine coming on. “Excuse me, I need to use the restroom,” Luke stated as he stood up.

Reid looked at him hopefully, but Luke shook his head, almost imperceptively.

Noah squinting all of the time, and Reid sticking up for Luke...and I loved the interaction with Henry. See Luke, even Henry, an innocent bystander knows what a moron Noah is!

rtruffles February 4 2011, 02:27:10 UTC

Thanks!!

I was hoping that people would pick on the restroom reference!

I'm glad that it made you laugh!

I loved adding Henry into this chapter, so I'm really happy that you enjoyed him!

nancygrew February 4 2011, 01:23:46 UTC

Great chapter! I love how Noah is just so casually dismissive of Luke being capable of doing a good job on the board or at Grimaldi. It seems very true to his character to just try to demolish any confidence Luke has in anything. Yay for Reid being grateful for Pushy Luke.

rtruffles February 4 2011, 02:33:17 UTC

Thanks!!

I really see Noah as being a very toxic force in Luke's life. I don't think that Noah can really see who Luke has become. The scary part is I don't think that Noah is trying to hurt Luke's confidence, he is really just telling the truth as he sees it. Yikes!
Reid really loves all of Luke!! Yay!