The Long and Winding Road 5/?

Nov 13, 2010 10:04



Title: The Long and Winding Road

Pairing: Luke and Lily ( but not in a creepy way) Luke and Reid

Summary: This is a story about the courtship of Reid and Luke

Rating G

Disclaimer: These are not my characters. All mistakes are mine.

A/N This chapter takes place simultaneously with the last one.

Chapter 5 )

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cas74 November 13 2010, 19:28:44 UTC
Good for Luke standing up to Lily. Too bad Lily has to only pretend to support Luke *sigh* I know she loves her son, but she is seriously twisted.

I love the texting, the insecurities that they both have is so sweet to see.

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rtruffles November 13 2010, 21:39:15 UTC
I rewrote the Lily part. Originally, I had her just see Luke's point of view and agree to give Reid a chance, but that seemed to out of character to me. LOL

I'm glad that you liked the texting. I love that they are both insecure, I think that that is part of them and adds to the excitement of the beginning of a relationship.

Thanks for reading!!

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jem_018 November 13 2010, 20:34:53 UTC
UGH Lily. *sighs*

I loved that Luke stood up to her though.

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rtruffles November 13 2010, 21:40:34 UTC
Thanks for reading! I really think that being with Reid has given Luke confidence and that is what has allowed him to stand up to Lily.

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rtruffles November 13 2010, 21:46:49 UTC
I'm glad that you liked that line. I just added it in. Initially I was going to have Lily see Luke's point of view, but that seemed out of character for her to me. LOL

Sorry for making you sad. I think that Luke definately has some insecurity and so does Reid. I think that everyone is unsure when they are starting a new relationship, so there is definately more to come. *hides*

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daybreaq November 14 2010, 00:43:11 UTC
"Reid just does not have the politically correct editing button in his brain." I LOVE that! Really excellent way to put it and so true!

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rtruffles November 14 2010, 01:09:13 UTC
Thank-you! Your comment made my day!
BTW I love your icon.

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sleeper6 November 14 2010, 04:31:12 UTC
Yes, they're talking, um, texting! Oh, Lily, I want to hate her but I think she'll come around (maybe? hopefully?).

So I know that when he says that he likes me he means it.
I love this rationalization by Luke. Very, very true. And I think Luke won't really ever have to worry about Reid being all wishy-washy like Noah could be at times. Reid will always tell it like it is, especially to Luke.

Another great chapter!

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rtruffles November 14 2010, 04:58:32 UTC
Thanks for reading and all of your encouragement!

Luke doesn't have to worry about Reid being wishy washy so he finds other things to worry about. LOL

I think that Lily will come around too! Originally I did have her accept Reid, but it just seemed to out of character to me. HAHAHA

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