The Long and Winding Road 9/?

[rtruffles]

Title: The Long and Winding Road

Pairing: Luke and Reid

Summary: This is the story of the courtship of Luke and Reid.

Disclaimer: These are not my characters. All mistakes are mine.

Rating NC17

Warning: This is their first time together. So this chapter is just porn. *blushes*

A/N Two things: I am not sure how many scars Luke has from the bullet wounds

Comments

[shadownyc]

The passion and love between Luke and Reid is so special. They're terrific together!

Lovely chapter!

[rtruffles]

Thank-you!!

I'm so glad that you are enjoying this story. I love the boys being together.

[sleeper6]

Reid is inside of me, Reid is inside of me. Holy Fuck Reid is Inside of ME!!!

AND

Oh my God, I’m fucking Luke, I’M FUCKING LUKE!!!

Okay, did you get inside my head? THAT's what I've always thought the two would be thinking--exactly that.

I enjoy Reid's silly thinking, like what Luke uses for his skin or his lips--oh, Reid.

Great chapter, and porn with LuRe is always welcome, always.

[rtruffles]

Thank-you! I can't seem to stop myself from writing their internal dialogue. LOL

I'm flattered that I have shared some thoughts with you!!!

I'm glad that you enjoyed Reid's silly thoughts, I can imagine Reid thinking those things at inappropriate moments.

Thanks for all of your comments!

[cas74]

Great chapter! I like the internal dialouge. Both of them were so worried about pleasing the other <3

[rtruffles]

Thanks!
I'm glad that you like the internal dialogue becuase I can't seem to make it stop. LOL
I think what makes them so great is that they do truly care about each other's happiness!

[rtruffles]

Thanks!
Don't ever worry about not being articulate enough! I always enjoy your comments!
I'm glad that you're still enjoying this story.

[ladynomad915]

That was a very hot story. I really enjoyed it.

loved when Reid would cover his body with Luke's when Luke would be on his stomach.

The sex was terrific.

great job

[rtruffles]

Thank you for your lovely comments. I am not super comfortable writing porn, but I really wanted to give them a first time together. It really means a lot to me that you enjoyed it. I always worry that it's going to turn out boring and mechanical which is so not how I imagine sex would be for them!!!

I'm glad that you liked the image of Reid covering Luke's body with his. I love that image too. It just seems so loving to me and so them.

Thank you again for commenting!

[ladynomad915]

I to get nervouse when I write love scenes for Brian and Justin and Luke and Reid fearing how people will crtic it. when I wrote my first love scne for Brian and Justin people loved it and were amazed that it was my first gay love scene.