The Long and Winding Road 14/?

Nov 23, 2010 16:24


Title: The Long and Winding Road
Pairing Reid and Luke
Other Characters: Katie, Bob and Chris
Summary: This is a story about the courtship of Luke and Reid
Disclaimer: These are not my characters. All mistakes are mine.
Rating PG 13 
A/N : This one is dedicated to sleeper6 because it’s her birthday! Happy Birthday BB I hope that you do something ( Read more... )

lure my fic rated pg13

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cas74 November 24 2010, 00:59:24 UTC
I'm so sorry about your cat! I lost my dog a few months ago and it felt like I lost a member of my family. *hugs*

Great chapter! I love that the boys are so smitten!
Thank you for writing that about the fellowship! That was something that I was very upset about. Reid would not cheat, he wouldnt have to!

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rtruffles November 24 2010, 01:04:11 UTC
Thanks it really does help knowing that other people can relate to my loss <3. I'm sorry that you lost your dog. I'm sure that pain is still with you. Pets offer such comfort!

I'm glad that you liked this chapter! I hated it when Reid admitted that he cheated on the fellowship. I thought that he was just trying to make loser Chris feel better.

Thanks for reading!

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csigeekfan November 24 2010, 01:23:18 UTC
Aaarggghhhh. Chris is such an idiot!

On the other hand, it made me grin to see Luke and Reid arrive at the start of the chapter all smiles.

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rtruffles November 24 2010, 01:27:02 UTC
Thanks!

Yes Chris really is an idiot!!

I'm glad it made you grin to see the boys all smiley and goofy.

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shadownyc November 24 2010, 01:52:40 UTC
It's great seeing Luke and Reid so together and on the same page.

I never found chemistry between Chris and Katie. Your version works better.

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rtruffles November 24 2010, 07:03:58 UTC
Thanks!
I'm glad that you like Reid and Luke on the same page.

I'm glad that you are fine with me keeping Katie and Chris apart. I never saw any chemistry between them either. I just found Chris to be a self centred bully. UGH. I think that's one of the reasons that it bothered me that Chris got Reid's heart. Double UGH!!!

Thanks for all of your comments and your encouragement!

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sleeper6 November 24 2010, 03:08:11 UTC
Thank you so much for the birthday wishes! Thank you, sweetie!

I love how you're incorporating more characters into this series and how they're potential obstacles for Luke and Reid (Noah, Alison, Chris).

I don't know who I dislike more, Noah or Chris. I love how you wrote Chris, btw. That's exactly how he acted on the show--like he was entitled to everything he wanted just because he's Chris Hughes. Boo! (His inner thoughts are hilarious, btw).

And I do love our boys and how much trust Reid has in Luke and how much confidence Luke has in Reid. They're just so good together, and you're showing that so well here.

Another fabulous chapter!

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rtruffles November 24 2010, 06:58:25 UTC
I hope that you had a fabulous day!!!

Thank you for saying that you liked the way that I wrote Chris. I worried that he might be ott but that's how I saw him. I hated how he bullied Katie into taking off her ring etc. UGH

Thanks again for all of your comments <3

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rtruffles November 24 2010, 06:23:32 UTC
Have a little faith my friend!!!

Thanks for reading and for all of your encouragement!!

*HUGS*

BTW we heard from the vet today and she confirmed that he had terrible heart disease. She said with feline heart disease cats seem to go on as thought nothing is wrong until they can't anymore, which is what happened to our cat. I am relieved to know that everything that could be done was done and that he didn't suffer more than was absolutely necessary.

Thanks again for your thoughtfulness.

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