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Agent Bartowski - part ten

Jun 17, 2009 20:00

Title: Agent Bartowski
Author: Ru_salki99
Rating: NC 17
Pairing: Chuck/Casey
Prompt: The Muse gave me - Chuck comes out to Morgan when Morgan sets him up with a girl
Disclaimer: Chuck belongs to NBC.
Author's Notes: Thanks to lillyg and nelka35 for translations.
Summary: Sarah's gone and Morgan thinks Chuck needs to get laid. And Morgan... well, he's like a ( Read more... )

chuck/casey, chuck, fanfic

Comments 16

blcwriter June 17 2009, 19:30:49 UTC

So lovely, so sweet, so satisfying, so hot. And I love the idea of their talking to each other in multiple languages-- because spy skills ought to be put to good uses, too.

ru_salki99 June 17 2009, 19:37:58 UTC

Hee hee. I suppose it's best to make good use of those skills when you can - keep them up to standard and what not :)

Glad you enjoyed.

revs_harlot June 17 2009, 20:39:01 UTC

yays i happy now
i loved it, it was awesome

ru_salki99 June 17 2009, 21:10:43 UTC

good i'm glad :D

lillyg June 17 2009, 23:16:31 UTC

*Gah* *is dead*

That was hot! And sweet! Well done...

I have few corrections on my own translation (cause it's easier in the context...)

*si tu présentes les choses comme ça*
*Ca valait* (I mis-spelled, sorry)

Geez! Waiting again for a new chapter *sighs*

Hugs

ru_salki99 June 18 2009, 06:51:43 UTC

Glad you enjoyed :D

And I'll get that fixed laters :)

themaskedmckay June 18 2009, 03:55:01 UTC

Aww, I hope the boys get to be partners but I'm happy to see they've made peace with the possibility of not being together.

<3<3<3 So much love for the idea of Chuck getting to be a full NSA agent.

midnight_malaga June 18 2009, 08:11:53 UTC

First things first, I'm loving this fic. I usually don't comment until the end of stories, but what you've got so far is really really good.

I will have to nitpick on one detail though - Chuck is actually closer with his explaination of protons and electrons. The protons and neutrons stay together in the nucleus, while the electrons are in various levels around it. Protons don't orbit neutrons at all.

I know, you were being poetic, and probably anyone not as neurotic as me (read: normal people) wouldn't care, but I felt like I should probably point it out.

Great work on the storyline - I do admit your casting of Sarah as villain is a guilty pleasure because her inability to keep it in her pants on the show really annoys me.

ru_salki99 June 18 2009, 13:14:42 UTC

I tried to do as much research as I could on the proton/electron thing (I can't really remember much from school and as someone who went out with a physicist I should be ashamed of my self). It's not vital to the story, but I will try to fix it so it's at least factually correct.

And yeah, she does have a serious problem keeping it in her pants :D