To Follow Her

[ru_salki99]

Title: To Follow Her
Author: Ru_salki99
Rating: PG
Pairing: Jayne/Kaylee(ish)
Disclaimer: Firefly belongs to Joss.
Prompt: Envy
Summary: Written for the_browncoats Rewatch Fic Challenge: Ep 01 - Serenity. Jayne tries to understand why Kaylee is still pissed at him.

Comments

[kalliasgrimm]

Aw this is cute, I love the ending. I haven't read KayleexJayne fiction in forever

[ru_salki99]

Neither have I, in fact, this is the first time I've written it and it's put me in the mood for some jaylee lovin. Currently navigating my way through jaylee_ship for some :)

[hobbitofkobol]

aww I liked this. And it's believable, especially at that point in the show

[ru_salki99]

thanks. I always did wonder what they were doing while the shit was hitting the fan in the cargo bay.

[faeriesfolly]

Very cool :) I think you pretty much nailed the both of them.

(I don't know if you meant it, but Kaylee says "“I’m ain’t the only one" and it should be either 'I'm not' or 'I ain't'. Otherwise it is 'I am am not'. ;) Hope that's not offensive to point out, because I did adore it and would love to see more from you--please tell me there is more. )

[ru_salki99]

No, not offensive at all. Concrit is very welcome :D

I'll get that fixed when I get in from work. Thanks and glad you enjoyed ^__^

[faeriesfolly]

I can hardly ever see stuff like that in my own fics (when I am fine at editing for others), so I pretty much depend on concrit. haha.

No prob & hope to see a lot more. :D

[ru_salki99]

thanks :)

[bookaddict43]

I do like the ending, it's just Jayne! *wide smile* You've done a good job with what was happening while the others were arguing in the cargo bay. I'm sure they would've ended up together long after :D :D

[ru_salki99]

yeah, had there not been an interupption, I'm sure there would've been some smooching... I may write some mroe jaylee, this has put me in the mood.