Agent Bartowski - part thirteen

[ru_salki99]

Title: Agent Bartowski
Author: Ru_salki99
Rating: NC 17
Pairing: Chuck/Casey
Prompt: The Muse gave me - Chuck comes out to Morgan when Morgan sets him up with a girl
Disclaimer: Chuck belongs to NBC.
Summary: Sarah's gone and Morgan thinks Chuck needs to get laid. And Morgan... well, he's like a dog with a bone sometimes. While Casey - he has his

Comments

[lillyg]

Now that I've slept, I hope I'm going to be inspired because the night before I couldn't think straight!

I like to see Casey unsure and full of doubts! It makes him more human... This chapter is cute! And I love the cake part and “Watching you make nummie treats is like porn for me,” is just hilarious!

[ru_salki99]

Yeah I wanted to show that Casey was dreading their seperation as much as Chuck was.

[flmun]

Squeee! An update to start my morning.

Wonderful character piece.

[ru_salki99]

thanks. Glad you enjoyed.

[onebrightmoment]

This chapter is just wonderful. Slow and sweet and insightful. Though don't think I didn't notice you glossing over the porn. I'll forgive you this once though ;) because this chapter is my favorite of the story.

I'm torn over the fact that they're not partners. It's kind of a nice twist, and it allows them to be together openly, but they'll be apart so much. :(
Can't wait for more!

[ru_salki99]

First off... *drools at your icon* - I want to lick it! Can I lick it? Also, I love, love, love how you can see Chuck in the reflection *drools again*

secondly... I didn't want to make it all about the porn. yes the porn is good, very good in fact, but I want to concentrate more on the emotional side... there will be more porn in the next chapter and the last, so don't panic :D

[onebrightmoment]

Yes, he's really fucking hot in those glasses. AND THANK YOU FOR NOTICING CHUCK IN THE REFLECTION!! I put him there myself. It will be in my next icon post. But that might not be as soon as I had hoped, so if you want it, feel free to take it.

LOL. Don't freak out! (there will be porn)

I was really just kidding about that~ I get what you were going for, and I think it worked really well. Like I said, this is definitely my fav chapter (even *gasp* minus the smut) because of the emotional impact of their upcoming separation. Excellent stuff! A little sad, but in a juicey, angsty way.

[ru_salki99]

You put him there yourself?

*bows down to your awesomeness!!!*

I feel bad taking it... I might save it and decide later whether to use it or not. But it is freaking awesome!

And hopefully the next chapter should be a lot more lighter, with some more humour in it. I've yet to write it so it might turn out different than I'm planning.

[ru_salki99]

the moodtheme was made by lidi. She has a few and instructions on how to put them onto your journal. You should check her out.

And thanks, I do try my best to keep in in character as much as possible.