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Fic: Reality (Shows) Bite

Feb 06, 2011 14:07

Title: Reality (Shows) Bite
Author: ruafair
Artist: wildcat92
Beta: fairfax_verde
Disclaimer: Real people, but this story is fiction, and written for fun.

( Part Four: )

adam_lambert, tommy_ratliff, lbb, rps, fic

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ruafair February 12 2011, 14:56:59 UTC

Aww thank you so much!!!!

Fiona

kain_abel February 12 2011, 16:20:02 UTC

OMG! This was super-adorable! I loved how you put it all together, how they bonded and most of all the friendship between the contestants. I would have loved to hear more if Jason has really been infatuated with Tommy at first (with the way he acted towards him) or if it's just his way of showing affection.

I would have loved it if it had taken a little longer before Adam and Tommy started making out, etc. but the way you did it gave it a lot of time to build up and to let the reader become infatuated with them as well. I loved it either way.

This was a great read! I'm always amazed how "first-timer"'s take on such stories and you did a wonderful job with it. Tommy coming back to audition for Adam's band was just a great final. And I'm sure they won't need as long to get the smooching on during the shows like they did in real life. ;D

Overall this was highly enjoyable and I laughed out loud more times than I can count. You brought in a lot of clichés and worked them over to make me laugh rather than headdesk. ♥

ruafair February 12 2011, 16:37:41 UTC

Oh wow, thank you so so much. I had plans for a longer story, and for more Jason but time was getting on, and I would have never finished it!!!

I am so glad you enjoyed and that it made you laugh!!

It was fun to do, and quite scary...

Thanks,

Fiona

itsalambertthng February 13 2011, 00:45:14 UTC

Loved this so much! Loved the interaction between Adam and Neil! so funny! Just how u imagine it to be in real life! HAHA! Great story! HOT sex! What more could u want?!!

ruafair February 13 2011, 07:28:32 UTC

Thanks so much!!!! Really glad you enjoy it :))

Fiona

zebrui February 13 2011, 01:35:03 UTC

Darling fic - I had a lot of fun reading it! I think I broke a tooth on the sugar, but I so enjoyed everyone's voices very much!

ruafair February 13 2011, 07:29:32 UTC

Yeah, sorry about the sugar overload on occasion!! But I'm glad you enjoyed it :))

Fiona

blueeye01 February 13 2011, 19:37:58 UTC

This was awesome and I really enjoyed it!

Ty for writing it. <3

ruafair February 14 2011, 15:46:59 UTC

And thank you so much for reading and enjoying it :))

Fiona