The Sixth Valentine's Day

Feb 08, 2009 00:55

The Freakboat and I are at it again!  This is our take on the first 14 Valentine's Days.  This might not make as much sense to you if you haven't read our previous opus, The Gift of Possibilities, detailing the first 12 Christmases; but this story falls within the universe we created in TGOP.

This madness is all my fault.  I blame the hydrocodone.

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mirandy, dwp, devil wears prada, v-day-the cliche: an editor's nightmare

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abilena February 8 2009, 07:39:57 UTC
Wonderful, absolutely wonderful. I'm loving this story. I would have liked to have read the Ping Sex though. that is hilarious. The EDICT was hilarious.

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ruari555 February 8 2009, 08:23:06 UTC
Well...The Freakboat handles Ping Sex better than me, so I like to leave those little dialogues to the "expert."

Regarding the "EDICT," sounds like Miranda, doesn't it?

Thanks for the review!

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punky_96 February 8 2009, 08:34:12 UTC
ping sex for lunch?
happy day.
and the EDICT
oh yeah and the dream...
what a great chapter.
i'm so loving this!

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ruari555 February 8 2009, 19:43:26 UTC
Thanks again for the positive review!

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caramelapples11 February 8 2009, 09:15:20 UTC
LOL The Edict had me in giggles! How Miranda. :D :D

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ruari555 February 8 2009, 19:44:18 UTC
I thought it sounded just like her! Thanks!

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whitelder February 8 2009, 10:41:53 UTC
Is their meant to be a vid in the middle Ruari?

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ruari555 February 8 2009, 17:38:23 UTC
Yes, but I was too subtle about it. "Dallas" was an American television series in the 1980's in which at the beginning of one season, it was revealed that the entire previous season was a dream. I stuck the video in as my way of whistling in the dark. However, it was probably too subtle, so I'm removing it.

Thanks.

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kdsusa3 February 8 2009, 12:53:18 UTC
Nice...Pure Miranda. I love the bathroom scene. It was romantic in a very loving and tender way. Thanks fir doing this.

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ruari555 February 8 2009, 19:45:43 UTC
Thank you for reading! And then reviewing! We'll question our sanity again at the end...just like we did at the end of TGOP.

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