Ok so here's the paper PLEASE COMMENT! ...for a grade...

Apr 25, 2006 21:37

Masochism was first introduced to the world by Richard Von Krafft-Ebing, in his work titled Psychopathia Sexulis. He defined this new term as ( Read more... )

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rubbermanishere April 26 2006, 11:06:06 UTC
Good paper. The writing is excellent yet still remains clear and understandable. It flows very well without curving down any unnecessary side roads. I myself do not know too much about Mark Twain, but nonetheless this paper gave me enough info on him and his apparent (for lack of a better word) psychosis to convince me was a Masochist.

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kickbackstroker April 26 2006, 19:38:21 UTC
Each paragraph transitioned well to the next and it weemed well organized. It was good that you started with the definition and then mentioned the lack of proof of his masochism "by most definitions" in the beginning yet showed suggestions in his writing. I think that made your argument stronger.

Although... it does kind of remind me of our whole "interpreting other peoples' art" conversation...

haha hope this helps...

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rubbaducke April 27 2006, 19:03:10 UTC
Thank Phil! Thanks Kristy! I can use both your commentary, big help! lol

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