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rubberbutton

Fic: Beyond the Pale 3/3

Jan 05, 2010 07:48

( Beyond the Pale, Part 3 )

pairing: sam/gene, tv: life on mars, fic

Comments 39

jean_geanie January 6 2010, 15:29:22 UTC

Just like an episode :) the dialog and plot were amazing. I really, really loved this (*memmed*)

rubberbutton January 6 2010, 16:16:33 UTC

Thanks so much! And thanks for the memmage. :) *is honored*

randomkyuu January 7 2010, 03:28:22 UTC

Great read! I agree with the others, it was like a LOM episode, but with Sam/Gene goodness. Our boys were in character, the plot kept me interested, and I enjoyed reading it all the way to the end. Fantastic job~

rubberbutton January 7 2010, 03:47:21 UTC

Thanks so much! I'm glad you enjoyed. And thanks for commenting! ♥

nebularific January 7 2010, 06:12:16 UTC

Nice. Good Sam characterization.

rubberbutton January 7 2010, 13:57:48 UTC

Thank you kindly! :)

anonymous January 7 2010, 13:26:53 UTC

I loved it! Nice and original! Echoing Archraven1234's sentiment when I say that my favourite bit was when the entire stations voted unanimously that Sam would be a good gay.
Thank you so much for posting!
Any chance of seeing more stories like this in the future?
Please, please, please, please - with a Sam/Gene on top?

rubberbutton January 7 2010, 14:07:33 UTC

Thanks so much!

Any chance of seeing more stories like this in the future?

Hmm, I don't know. I'll probably write more Sam/Gene, but case!fic is hard for me -- I'm just so bad at plotting out crimes and then finding clues that aren't hit-you-over-the-head-obvious. :S

I do have a plot bunny for a zompocalypse fic ... anyone up for that?

severinne January 7 2010, 15:47:15 UTC

This was such a great read with the sort of casual Sam/Gene banter that felt just like something from canon, which of course only served to reinforce my view that this unspoken sexual tension is canon. For that, I salute you. *salute*

I also have to give you props for Max, who I thought was rather well-written - much like Annie, he seems resigned to discrimination in a way that moves him beyond caring so that he's able to just be his own character. And I love how he became a foil for Gene's jealousy, even though it was Gene that Max checked out during that first meeting with the whole swapping-blowjobs jab. Which cracked me the hell up, btw.

Really enjoyed this one, thank you!

rubberbutton January 7 2010, 16:37:13 UTC

For that, I salute you. *salute*

Just doing my part for the cause!

I'm glad you liked Max; I know OCs are so often touch and go, but I'm a sucker for jealous!Gene. :D

Thanks for commenting!