Comments | rubie_so_ho: Fic: These Empty Hands, Part 1 of ? (L/V, Troy/V, L/Hannah, Wallace, Mac, etc.)

rubie_so_ho

Fic: These Empty Hands, Part 1 of ? (L/V, Troy/V, L/Hannah, Wallace, Mac, etc.)

Feb 15, 2006 02:00

Title: These Empty Hands, Part 1 of ( Read more... )

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hi meggaaaasta February 15 2006, 21:17:42 UTC

this was so good you have to write a next chapter

havemy_heart February 15 2006, 21:24:06 UTC

I agree that in an artistic sense you left it at the perfect place. But I want to see them get back together! Please?

rubie_so_ho February 16 2006, 03:04:28 UTC

Okay, I think I will write more chapters...I'll keep everyone posted!

klawick003 February 16 2006, 04:15:02 UTC

Yeah, I think drunk Veronica was pretty out of character, but she was drunk. And she seemed to forgive Troy really fast. Anyway, other than that, I enjoyed this b/c Troy is dead sexy...lol

Loved this:

She rushed to the front door, eager to see anyone else. Hell, I’ll even settle for Dick. This shit is unbearable...

Haha, Gotta love Dick!

rubie_so_ho February 16 2006, 04:50:52 UTC

Hey - thanks for the comment.

I agree that she was out of character...but yeah, she was drunk. I tried to make her as respectable of a drunk as possible. In my story, she just really wants to let loose and try to look for the fun in things. She wanted to look past all the bad stuff happening as of late.

I wanted the forgiving Troy thing not to take up too much space in the story. I can see where it'd be a little unbelievable, but I didn't want to dwell on it too long.

klawick003 February 16 2006, 07:36:18 UTC

Yea, I still really enjoyed it tho. I hope there will be more! Please? Lol.

three_fates1987 February 17 2006, 03:47:39 UTC

This is great! I adore Troy and I love seeing him back in Neptune. You really captured his character's charisma here. Plus it was very interesting to see V lose control.