Fic: The Game, R, (L/V, L/H, ensemble)

[rubie_so_ho]

Title: The Game

Comments

[havemy_heart]

I really liked this. I could completely see Logan and Veronica trying to one-up each other like this. The part with Veronica gushing to Hannah was priceless, and the scene in the storage room was hot! A couple little things:

and to ask for the occasional behavior.
I think this is supposed to be *favor*

and

Logan grew more and more annoyed that Veronica bopping about the room
There should be a "was" after Veronica

Anyway, this was fun. Any plans to continue?

[die_of_laughter]

I am in love with your icon. heh.

[thatmarsgirl]

Gahhh this was absolute perfection and I loved it and wow. ♥

[anonymous]

Way to have a backbone, Pre-Pubescent Barbie.

Best line of the story!! And considering there were so many awesome lines, especially coming from Veronica, that's saying a lot. Loved, loved, loved this story!! So in character for Veronica and Logan; you completely nailed their voices. This was funny, snarky, and so, so hot. You wrote Veronica and Logan at their best - snarky and competitive w/o being angry or angsty.

Kate :)

[anonymous]

I loved this. It was really fun and interesting to read. The storage room scene was hott!

[la623]

I love it! :)