Comments | rubie_so_ho: Fic: These Empty Hands, Part 2 (L/V, T/V, Weevil, Hannah), R

rubie_so_ho

Fic: These Empty Hands, Part 2 (L/V, T/V, Weevil, Hannah), R

Feb 16, 2006 20:36

Title: These Empty Hands, Part 2 ( Read more... )

Comments 15

endlessxwinter February 17 2006, 06:56:25 UTC

SOOOOOOO GOOODDD!!!!!!!!!

i am speechless.
that's about all i can say.

rowanceleste February 17 2006, 07:03:31 UTC

I know it won't be that simple for them to get together but I loved this chapter!

rubie_so_ho February 17 2006, 13:09:18 UTC

Yeah, haha. I definitely know it will not be this easy on the actual show. I just miss seeing them together so much - I needed to indulge myself!

Thanks to everyone for the lovely comments!!!

fickledame February 17 2006, 07:17:02 UTC

Wow, excellent second part! Your writing seemed even smoother and just generally better than the first part. Great job!

aureliades February 17 2006, 07:17:35 UTC

WOOT! Yes! I'm so glad you continued this.

Wow, you seriously packed a punch with this story. Wrapping up all the little details at once and still managing to bring them together. I liked how you didn't show the mushy talk they'd have to have eventually. Most everything has already been said in their thoughts or monologues to the reader and all we really need to know is that they're together now.

Awesome!

rubie_so_ho February 17 2006, 13:09:53 UTC

Thanks!
Love your icon. One of my favorite lines between L&V ever.

shealynn88 February 17 2006, 13:14:47 UTC

I love the plot, and you put a little Weevil in there (yay!) And the end was very sweet.

I love how you put their voices even in the narrative portions. They're even snarky in their heads!

House that Liposuction Built and Nip/Schmuck totally crack me up! :)