Comments | rubie_so_ho: Fic: Witness, NC-17 (Logan/Veronica)

rubie_so_ho

Fic: Witness, NC-17 (Logan/Veronica)

Feb 19, 2006 13:16

Title: Witness ( Read more... )

Comments 15

rindee February 20 2006, 03:16:43 UTC

It's fantastic. I see, from your note, that you were bored with the courtroom stuff, but I loved that Veronica, Logan, and Keith watched the video in the courtroom. I like that Veronica had to testify about her relationship with Logan and realize how she'd treated him. My favorite part (of the courtroom portion): "A side angle shot saw Veronica of yesteryear walk on her knees over to her boyfriend, wrap her arms around him, and kiss him soundly on the lips. I looked so…so happy. I looked in love, like Logan could do no wrong. Minutes later, I betrayed him." Oh, yeah, Weevil shaking hands was cool too. Great story.

rubie_so_ho February 20 2006, 03:30:10 UTC

Thanks rindee! Yeah, I was hoping that the whole "I just realized what I did to him - I suck" factor came out. I'm glad you saw it!

scornedsaint February 20 2006, 04:05:25 UTC

I kinda like the courtroom drama aspect of it. Very good pacing. I loved the beginning especially.

havemy_heart February 20 2006, 06:18:21 UTC

Wow. I really love this. Setting aside the smut, which was very hot, I loved the emotions. Just them coming together and giving each other strength is beautiful.

la623 February 21 2006, 03:29:08 UTC

Awww...I loved this! :) So sweet!

rubie_so_ho February 21 2006, 14:40:29 UTC

Thank you so much!