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ruby_caspar

fic: promise me chapter one

Jul 27, 2010 23:26

FANDOM: MERLIN

Title: Promise Me (1/?)
Word Count: 1,280
Rating: T (G for this part)
Character/ Pairings: Arthur/Gwen, Merlin
Warnings: None for this chapter
Genre: Romance/Angst

Summary: Arthur faces an impossible choice between love and duty, but what happens when one of those is taken from him? Does any choice remain?

( Chapter One - Goodbye )

rating: g, fanfiction, ch: gwen, wip, ch: arthur, merlin, ch: merlin

Comments 11

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ruby_caspar July 28 2010, 23:56:51 UTC

Thanks - yep, this is how I see Gwen reacting as well, especially if the lady in question was actually a good one. Alas, since the Merlin writers don't seem to believe in non-idiotic/enchanted good female characters beyond Gwen, I don't think we'll get to see that!

The second chapter's up, I hope you that too! ^^

javabreeze July 28 2010, 03:47:23 UTC

ruby_caspar July 28 2010, 23:57:06 UTC

Thank you! :D

azwarrior July 28 2010, 04:09:39 UTC

I got a little "teary eyed" reading this...oh, the angst! I just want to give Gwen a hug. Im so glad that this story wont leave you alone : ) I cannot wait to read the next chapter.

ruby_caspar July 28 2010, 23:57:44 UTC

:D Glad the angst is working - I don't write it that often! Next chapter is up now, hope you like :) Thanks!

angelgirl171 July 28 2010, 07:10:50 UTC

why why why damn uther. you know it is moments like this i HATE uther and want him died. the angst was beautiful and well angsty. you kept them in character, especially merlin with his matchmaking. but i can´t blame him. UPDATE SOON

ruby_caspar July 28 2010, 23:58:49 UTC

First off, LOVE your icon!

Second, I'd love to hear what you think of Uther in the later chapters, lol! Really glad you liked it, thanks so much for the lovely comment - the next chapter's up now ^^

angelgirl171 July 29 2010, 00:12:10 UTC

thank you, do you also watch glee or more important do also LOVE Will and Emma.

well i have a spot for angst arwen stories. because the more boundaries they have the more EPIC their love is

ruby_caspar July 29 2010, 12:07:51 UTC

Yes and yes :)

And agreed - I'm hoping for some good angst in s3!

reseda_3067 July 28 2010, 18:18:16 UTC

This is terrible! Not the story, but all the heartbreak. This can´t be happening. I feel like crying.

I hope it will get better in the next chapter...

ruby_caspar July 28 2010, 23:59:19 UTC

LOL. Heehee glad the angst is working and that you liked it! :D