fic: concussion part 2/3

[ruby_caspar]

 FANDOM: PRIMEVAL

Title: Concussion (2/3)
Rating: M
Pairing/ characters: Becker/Jess, Matt
Word Count: 3,515 (this part)
Spoilers: Not really

Summary: Becker gets a head injury out in the field and Jess has to do everything she can to keep him awake until help arrives... and that might include letting slip a few daydreams...

Well, here’s part two, as

Comments

[honestlysweet]

I cant put into words how much I adore this story!
I love Jess being assertive and calm. She's so brilliant.
And Becker all flustered is adorable xD
I have to wait until tomorrow for the final part...
*looks at clock*
It's going to be a long night, but I know it will be worth the wait! :D

[oaremylife]

PLEASE UPDATE SOOOO SOON!!! (I reviewed the first chapter of fanfiction but continued here... ah well!) PLEASE UPDATE SOON!! THIS IS JUST AMAZING!!

[impish_dragon]

Oh you can't leave it there. Get back and udpate.

Just read the first two chapters. Good work on those. And yeah on Jess for having the guts to not go back to the way things were.

[taraljc]

DOOD. OMG. THIS IS AWESOME.

ETA: you so you know, I have been refreshing ElJay obsessively for the past few days, with fingers crossed. I normally don't read WIPs, but OMG I LOVE THIS STORY SO MUCH. It gives me capslock of GLEE.

[dreamer_98]

GAH! You can't leave it there!

Anyway, this was awesome. Love Jess being ballsy and deciding to stand up for herself and get Becker to own up to the situation instead of ignoring it. You go girl!