fic: Blast from the Past

[ruby_caspar]

FANDOM: PRIMEVAL

Title: Blast from the Past
Pairing: Becker/Jess
Word Count: 7,775
Rating: PG-13

Summary: Becker happens upon a 10-year-old girl who has come through an anomaly. The catch is, this little girl is going to grow up to become a certain field coordinator... that is, if he can get her home in time and in one piece.

Comments

[fringedweller]

This is brilliant! Of course ten year old Jess cuts straight to the heart of the matter! And then just kisses the argument straight out of him. Well done, a fabulous fic.

[ruby_caspar]

Thanks, I'm really glad you liked it! I figure that once Jess knows for sure Becker likes her, nothing will stand in her way, lol!

[clea2011]

Ah, this was fun all the way through. Loved it! :)

[ruby_caspar]

Thank you! Really glad you liked it ^^

[yappichick]

RUUUUBBBBYYYYY!!! This is awesomely fantastic.

I love seeing 10 year old Jess. And her cheekiness = ♥ You know what I like? That she wasn't all "Tee hee, this guy is cu-te!" She had spunk! :D

But, you know what I love more? 20 year old Jess taking Becker and kissing him for all he's worth. Sorry, buddy, you've got no other option than full and complete surrender. LOL

Awesome job, like normal, chickie! Can't wait until you post more goodies! This seems like a good time to remind you that my birthday is coming up, LOL ;) ;)

[ruby_caspar]

One of the reasons I'm glad you're into Primeval now is so I can laugh at the comments you leave me, lol! Thanks, I'm really glad you liked it, and like little Jess :-D And yeah, I figured Jess would just go for it once she's got any kind of a go-ahead (I would...)

And... we'll see. ;)

[whuffle]

*smirks*

Makes a certain sense, given the way Jess has watched him. She's been waiting patiently for this moment for ten years. And her inner ten year old can't move on until she know how the story ends. Does Becker take her advice? She's been waiting to find out....

[ruby_caspar]

Part of me wants to write a companion piece to this story, of her first being recruited into the ARC and then reading about Becker... what do you think? Thanks for the comment, I'm really glad you liked it! :)

[whuffle]

I think writing that would be a logical extension of what you've already started. And well, you already know I'd like to see it when it's done!

[deinonychus_1]

SQUEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!! That was adorable and hilarious and sweet and fun and brilliant!

I loved how freaked out Becker was when he realised who the little girl was, and how he kept getting confused and tongue tied around her. I especially the conversation about whether or not Jess was his girlfriend, and this line: He looked back at Jess - Jessica - and saw that she was looking at him with a distinctly unimpressed look on her face. “A simple 'no' would have been enough,” she said drily. made me laugh so much.

And then yey for the funny and adorable conversation with adult Jess back at the ARC. And double yey for Jess pouncing on him when he admitted he wanted to ask her out!

Lovely, awesome fic. I really enjoyed that one :-)

[ruby_caspar]

Aw, thank you! Really glad you liked it. I'm a sucker for kid!fic ;)