Comments | ruby_caspar: fic: whipped

ruby_caspar

fic: whipped

Dec 11, 2011 23:25

FANDOM: PRIMEVAL

Title: Whipped
Rating: PG-13 (for mild language)
Pairings/characters: Becker/Jess, Matt
Word Count: 2,600ish
Warnings: None

Summary: Nothing is more entertaining to Matt than Becker trying to ignore his feelings for Jess... and things become a lot more entertaining when she starts spending time with a handsome young ARC recruit.

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fanfiction, rating: pg-13, ch: jess, primeval, ch: matt, pairing: becker/jess, oneshot, ch: becker

Comments 7

darkhorse_99 December 12 2011, 00:22:36 UTC

That was great! Matt is such a little antagonist, laughing at Becker's epic manpain. I love the interaction between those two, and I can *so* see Matt offering to put in a good word for Jess, to Becker's extreme annoyance. Loved it, great story.

dreamer_98 December 12 2011, 04:07:13 UTC

Hee, this was adorable. Oh Becker, you're so clueless. Loved Matt egging him on and enjoying his jealousy and discomfort.

impish_dragon December 12 2011, 05:21:11 UTC

Good job. Silly Becker, just man up and admit you like her.

deinonychus_1 December 12 2011, 19:13:05 UTC

*sporfles madly* This was great! Becker is such an easy target when he acts like that around Jess, and Matt would so take advantage of it to have a bit of fun.

clea2011 December 12 2011, 23:12:27 UTC

Oh, this was adorable and wonderfully funny. I can just see Matt doing this, and all the interaction was great fun. It'll be a sad day for Matt when Becker finally stops being pathetic!

It's a shame you're blocked on Just Pretend, I'm loving that one, but then this was a fabulous alternative. Great story :)