fic: into the woods 1/2

[ruby_caspar]

FANDOM: PRIMEVAL

Title: Into the Woods (1/2)
Word Count: 5,710 (this part... eek!)
Rating: M (this part is PG though)
Pairing: Becker/Jess 
Spoilers: None really
Warning: It's almost 6,000 words and nothing really happens...? :/

Summary: An anomaly alert in Norway means that Jess has to join the soldiers in the field, something that Captain Becker is not

Comments

[dreamer_98]

Loving this so far. Love that Jess is sticking up for herself and proving that she is kickbutt and awesome. I actually love them fighting; Jess taking back the coffee cup... burn!

I can't wait to read what happens next. :)

[hiddencait]

Oh man this looks fantastic so far (not that I'm at all surprised as I heart your fic normally) but this just seems awesome! Love competent!Jess like burning, and poor Becker has got to get his head out of his arse one of these days!

[pinkcat4569]

Wow! What a great story! I'm a little intimidated now, that is so much better than anything I've written. That was just so good!

[deinonychus_1]

ooh, I like this! Great idea for getting Jess into the field without needing to rely on coincidence and 'wrong time, wrong place'.

Becker is acting like an idiot. I'm sure he's just worried about her, and utterly failing to express that in a sensible manner, but he's still acting like an idiot. Go Jess wanting to show him she can handle it!

[lsellersfic]

I love this set up! You've got some great dynamics between Becker and Jess.