This was just fabulously wonderful :) I don't know why you're apologising for it being long, it gives the reader a chance to really get into the story. I love that you keep them in character, and it's great to see Jess being so strong throughout it.
There's no need to apologize for writing an amazing, brilliant fic. I just love how awesome Jess was in all of this, and how indignant she was that Becker didn't seem to be impressed or appreciate anything she was doing. But our Becker is indeed an emotional retard, and I'm glad he was able to tell her how he really felt.
Yey! This was awesome! Stop apologising for it being long, because long is GOOD when fic is this brilliant!
Go Jess! Competant *and* heroic, and I think Becker's man are going to go out of their way to be nice to her and protctive (not that she needs it, apparently) from now on. Yey for Becker eventually addmiting what was wrong and apologising (a bit late, but he got there eventually). And yey for sharing body heat snuggling in the tent!
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I love that you keep them in character, and it's great to see Jess being so strong throughout it.
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I love Hollings, Harvey and Adams too.
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Go Jess! Competant *and* heroic, and I think Becker's man are going to go out of their way to be nice to her and protctive (not that she needs it, apparently) from now on. Yey for Becker eventually addmiting what was wrong and apologising (a bit late, but he got there eventually). And yey for sharing body heat snuggling in the tent!
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