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Jul 30, 2004 07:48

adline
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in disguise
pretty eyes
maybe a mouth
that's how i imagine her

she could be a prodigy
or a man with ten scars and turniquette

but every l e t t e r
is poetry/glossy moonbeams
and masonic secrets

one dot and a vast cosmic alliance
she is a portal

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© Katherine Anne Brenner 2004

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isobel July 30 2004, 09:38:26 UTC
adline, as in adline from the b.com 4um? :)
it is very pretty and very fitting for adline. or who i imagine adline to be. :)

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ruby_ice July 30 2004, 09:39:47 UTC
thanks,yes this adline person inspired me. :D hehe:P

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breathehope July 30 2004, 14:16:48 UTC
Always nice. <3

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ruby_ice July 30 2004, 14:18:21 UTC
thank you

and thank you for the other thing too
being there to set my head straight
<3

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breathehope July 30 2004, 14:19:12 UTC
I'm always here for you. :)

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blueishinfinity July 31 2004, 09:32:06 UTC
did you put this on the 4um? i really like it. if not you should consider doing so...

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scumater August 3 2004, 15:36:11 UTC
thank you, yes i did. :)

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sugaloo August 3 2004, 15:12:54 UTC
SoftsOft...
Adline...who is she? he?

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scumater August 3 2004, 15:35:30 UTC
she/he is a mysterious poster at the bjork.com website that pretends to be a 7 or 8 year old girl, but is very philosophical and arty beyond belief. The writing are at first very disconnected and seem drug induced, but all at the same time everything starts coming together to make these profound statements. And even when it doesn't make sense, the words he/she uses are woven so beautifully that it doesn't matter...it's poetry. You remind me of her sometimes with your writings. :)

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sugaloo August 4 2004, 03:59:10 UTC

Hmm, interesting yes

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