-> Tree of Happiness <-

[ruby_yuri91]

Title: Tree of Happiness
Pairing: 2min (girl!taemin), minor!onkey (girl!key)
Rating: PG-13
Genre: Romance, fluff(?)
Length: Oneshot
A/N: My first journal and it's for 2Min!! Still a newbie, still, please enjoy and comment! Thanks ^^

“Girls, have you ever heard of ‘The Tree of Happiness’?” a tall, brown-hair girl asked her friends.

“No, never heard of it.

Comments

[fuyukimasa]

This is beautiful.
I feel like crying reading this.

Thanks so much for sharing this ^_^

[ruby_yuri91]

hehe.. and thank you for reading and commenting ^^

[pinkbiohazard]

Your first fic? Congrats. Since you asked for comments to help you improve, I'll just be honest. Your storytelling style reminds me of books I read as a kid, like maybe 6 years old. I'm not saying that's a bad thing, because I have no idea of how old you are or who your target audience is. If you are young then I can't expect you to write in the same style and to address the same issues as older fanfic writers.

But, yeah, it seems extremely childlike and maybe it isn't realistic at all. Again, if you're young then you can ignore these comments! So those are my honest views on your fanfic. Have fun writing, I hope this will be the first of many.

[ruby_yuri91]

haha... i don't know the range age for young to you but i'm just turned 19 years old this year.. i wrote this story about 4 years ago, i think.. just now i have the courage to post this ^^ i've let my friends to read this but they didn't say that this is childlike, they just checked my grammar and spelling and that's all.

however, thanks for your opinion and advice! i'll work harder next time! thanks ^^

[ittybittydaiyu]

OMGGGGGGG he proposed!!!!!

THIS IS THE BEST DAMN OMG, STORY EVER!
MY BABY IS GETTING MARRIED.
AHHH

-GOOD JOB

[ruby_yuri91]

hehe... i don't know that this is the best story that you have ever read but i'll try harder next time!!

thanks for reading and commenting ^^

[ittybittydaiyu]

aw!
thanks honey :DD
anytime