today i skipped sociology

May 11, 2005 17:50

theres not really any point in school this week. but i still want to be in media. and the last 2 philosophy lessons because we have been half promised a lesson sitting in the sun by the castle.
i would like to write a poem about water. about lakes and clouds and rain and shadows. i want my poem to by teal and grey.

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A poem about water. drama_n_dreams May 11 2005, 20:35:14 UTC
I know what you mean, I'm still trying to come up with a line about teeth. Maybe, I should just say teefus and leave it at that. lol

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Re: A poem about water. rubygloom178 May 12 2005, 18:16:40 UTC
well it doesnt have to be. what rhymes with teefus........

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Re: A poem about water. drama_n_dreams May 12 2005, 19:10:05 UTC
I'm not entirely sure about the word teefus--too reminiscent of Ebonics I guess. However, the poem's dangerously teetering on the edge of being artistically sensual or sexually perverse--maybe both? anyway, I'll work on it a little later when I'm feeling a bit heady and otherworldly, which is when I'm at my most creative.

what rhymes with teefus? hmm... how about:

raucous
estrus
mucous
fungus

just to name a few.

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Re: A poem about water. rubygloom178 May 12 2005, 20:38:37 UTC
throw in the word doofus and i think your on to a winner

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