Tok Tok Tok

Nov 18, 2011 18:51

Title: Tok Tok Tok
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type: one-shot, character(s): super junior, pair: eunhae

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NICE!!! ext_267080 November 18 2011, 12:51:13 UTC
AHAHA!!! It was actually not as funny as I thought it would be :( Hehe but still... I am having goosebumps :O

And I don't get the pun but Sungmin is cute!!! Hehe and where is Yesung?! HEHE nice story for your first one and I am amazed by your wonderful descriptions ^.^

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Re: NICE!!! rubyjn November 18 2011, 13:36:45 UTC
hahaha! Maybe it was 'cause I was imagining the entire scene. Especially the last part? Where the marble rolled in? hahah...That one I took from 23:59, that's why I cracked up laughing when I was writing that scene.

unholy = like what we always say, those irritating problems or can also be referred to their 'ghostly' problems

And I was wondering how to fit Yesung in...hmmm maybe when I have another sudden bout of inspiration I'll add Yesung in!! ^^

Yesh thank youzzzz. Maybe I should edit a little and print and let our EL teachers read? hahaha

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Re: NICE!!! ext_267080 November 18 2011, 13:56:50 UTC
Hoe does taking it from a horror movie make it funny??? I got kinda scared imagining it... if I ever dream/see a little girl coming into my dream, I am going to scream ur name :)

Hehe u must fit Yesung next time!!! Maybe Yemin or Kyumin or Kyusung :)

Haha and yeah u should totally let Ms Chua read it!!!

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Re: NICE!!! rubyjn November 18 2011, 14:01:23 UTC
hahaha....Just try imagining a marble rolling in while Eunhae are on the bed, scared out of their wits and their comic-like reactions. or maybe it's just me and my head hahaha!!

meh don't scream my name! I was wondering how to sleep when I was writing out this hahaha

If Miss Chua's still our teacher next year heehee

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thexiahlover November 18 2011, 15:03:54 UTC
OMG YOU FINALLY WROTE SOMETHING!♥

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rubyjn November 18 2011, 15:13:08 UTC
HAHAHA YES I FINALLY GOT OFF MY LAZY BUM TO WRITE THIS! whee! go read and commmmmmment.

I don't know why but I found it really funny when I was thinking of this story. meh even Rosemary up there didn't find it that funny =( oh well

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thexiahlover November 18 2011, 15:34:53 UTC
It was a little hilarious down there ^_^
I always have this weird problem too, it's horrible :(
I love your colorful use of vocabulary, so cheem!
Are you gonna hand this to the teachers? If you are, then I am doing that to one of my fanfics too!
Nahh I was joking.
I love Kyumin!
He's too cute! And he loves Jay ;) /wiggles brows at you

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rubyjn November 19 2011, 00:34:55 UTC
hahaha I wrote this after I heard that crazy marble sound when I was doing A MATH. And I got freaked out since I was home alone nevermind that it was day time. 8D

And yesh, must get into the habit of using my un-used vocabs. at least till Os are over hahaha

Before I start spazzing, KYUMIN ISH CUTE. Okay done.

mehh. who loves Jay? Donghae???? I never knew :O go get married to either Jay or Junsu; your pick :P

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