Comments | rubykate: Chocolate (Pansy/Millicent, PG-13)

rubykate

Chocolate (Pansy/Millicent, PG-13)

Sep 14, 2004 18:57

Title: Chocolate
Pairing: Pansy/Millicent
Rating: PG-13
Words: 752
A/N: Big thanks to godonthewater for beta'ing! This fic is for mistressmeow who requested the pairing, and also for hpfsc's chocolate challenge.

( It starts because Pansy is sent too much chocolate from home, and Millicent, none at all. )

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Comments 18

fruce September 14 2004, 18:32:24 UTC

Meeble.

That was really, really good. I have a soft spot for Millicent and she's wonderfully human and three-dimensional here. “There’s a lot of licking,” OMG, you fill my heart with warm and fuzzy feelings.

I shall most definitely rec this.

rubykate September 14 2004, 19:02:20 UTC

thankyou very much! :D

slytherin_ciara September 17 2004, 20:58:23 UTC

Fantastic story! I just love this image of Millicent...“Millicent has turned all of the taps on, as usual, and is gleefully watching the bath fill with bubbles.”

rubykate September 17 2004, 21:17:02 UTC

thankyou! :)

leather_wings September 20 2004, 15:42:00 UTC

This is muy good.
She doesn’t want Millicent turning into somebody that talks and talks all the time, just like everybody else.

rubykate September 20 2004, 15:45:26 UTC

thankyou! :D

seventines September 27 2004, 12:11:34 UTC

This is a really sweet fic - I loved Pansy's almost detached musing about Millicent, her skin, her shape.
The chocolate was a nice touch and the backstory was convincing and well handled.

I found you a while ago through alohomorare btw and I'll add you, to follow your writing. Also, will rec this over at hp_femslashrecs :D

rubykate September 27 2004, 12:19:06 UTC

Aww, thankyou very much! :D its lovely to get feedback like that <3