Poem Time!

[rugby101]

Well, things are still...good

Not really doing much right now and all, so I figured I'd leave you all with something different. Ever since I have been living here and all, I really got into writing and stuff instead of the normal journal thingy . So, here's a couple of poems I've written. One that some may have heard, others that no one has.

Comments

[lelalay]

*cough* (lj-cut text="whatever you want here")

only use < > instead of ( )

*hugs*

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[rugby101]

Clueless, but I'll change it...whatcha think about it all though?

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[lelalay]

LOL sorry, i meant to comment and forgot.

Lies: Honestly, this sounds like a plain rant with weird line breaks not a poem.

Untitled: I like this one. Especially toward the end :)

Within this Battle: This is a good one too. Generally I do like your poems, just that 1st one was off.

I promise: This one kinda suprised me, i didn't like the begining, but I kept reading anyway and 1/2 way through I started liking it :)

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[rugby101]

Yeah - I know what you mean about the Lies one. It's like a short story, but not...but it's not exactly a poem - I dunno - I think it is a poem - it's one of my favorites cause of the whole metaphor and all...but thinks for the comments!