The Chase pt. 1
This is a movie that I am writing I can only write parts of it every now and then cause I refuse to force this and it's crap
this is my baby so everyone tell me how you feel about it
Charlie and Tommy are brothers, Charlie is 23 years old and Tommy is 18. Prom is coming up and Tommy cannot find a prom date. He is socially awkward, and not the best ( Read more... )
this is my baby so everyone tell me how you feel about it
Charlie and Tommy are brothers, Charlie is 23 years old and Tommy is 18. Prom is coming up and Tommy cannot find a prom date. He is socially awkward, and not the best ( Read more... )
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If I were to make one suggestion... it would be to avoid the 'formal' dialogue. It shows a bit in places and when it does, it reads a bit like a script. Obviously that's what it is, but you know what I mean. Other than that... don't leave me with cliffhangers! =P
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If it were a movie I'd probably watch it.
I hate T already though.
He's funny but he's like Urkel's evil twin brother.
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