My Mom Said

[ruggerdavey]

(I wrote this last night, but LJ was temporarily offline or something. I'm still not sure if it's done, but I'm posting it anyway. What do you think

Comments

[writingpathways]

It's beautiful Rachel. It paints a definite picture of who your mom is and how she helped to make you, who I know you are. It rings true and real.

[ruggerdavey]

Thank you so much. I'm glad to know you like it. I want to put it in my mom's stocking for Christmas, so I'm happy to know that it's not a really horrible poem or anything.

[ruggerdavey]

Thanks. I was thinking about poking it a little and getting it ready on pretty paper to put in my mom's stocking at Christmas (which I just realized isn't all on me this year, as I have my step-dad to help). I'm pretty sure she'd cry, but that she'd really like it.

(So, yes, she's still alive. I don't know what I'd do without her, actually).

[ruggerdavey]

*blushes* Thanks.

[blukitten]

beautiful

[blukitten]

Just got this today. Thanks.