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Dance With The Devil (Supernatural)

Apr 07, 2009 12:28

Title: Dance With The Devil
Author: Kate (ruinedlove)
Rating: PG-13 for hell
Category: Gen
Word Count: 100
Spoilers: Through season four
Summary: Dean falls; giving in to Alastair.
Disclaimer: Kripke owns it all. Lucky bastard.
Notes: A little Dean-in-hell drabble for you. Written for the spn13 prompt Fire. No beta, but the damage shouldn't be too bad.

( 'Okay,' Dean whispers, his voice rough, his lips cracked and bleeding. )

category: drabble, fandom: supernatural, rating: pg-13, category: gen

Comments 19

flying_songs April 7 2009, 20:24:37 UTC

Holy shit, you nailed it.

This is just like I imagine it to be. :|

Though, I think Dean would look up into Alastair's eyes, rather than not look at all, but holy crap, this is amazing. Do you mind if I save this onto my hard-drive? D:

ruinedlove April 7 2009, 20:38:23 UTC

Thanks! ♥ Although, I disagree about Dean. (Obviously, lol, since I wrote it the way I did.)

Dean runs from his emotions and cloaks them in jokes in sarcasm. When he eventually breaks, especially when he fails, I think that he's too ashamed of himself to look anyone in the eye, especially someone like Alistair. You know for 30 years down there he had snarky comebacks for everything Alistair said to him, but now he's giving in and letting Alistair win. And he can't bear to see the look on his face. But that's just my opinion, everyone's entitled to their own. :)

And sure, you can save this. As long as you're not redistributing it, it's fine by me. :) Thanks again for reading!

flying_songs April 7 2009, 20:41:18 UTC

Oh yeah I can see where you're coming from.

I think he'd just look him in the eye because he's so defiant all the time, anyway. Though a mixture of looking in the eye and then looking away also seems credible. I'm not sure why, I just feel like he'd look up with his head hanging down. I don't think that, even in defeat, he'd show that he was defeated.

I wasn't going to redistribute it, not at all! I'm just saving it for reading at a later date. <3

ruinedlove April 7 2009, 20:49:24 UTC

Very good point! And a very in-character act for Dean. In fact, that's how I usually write him. EXCEPT for hell/post-hell fic. Because Dean came back totally different from hell. He'd rather run than fight, he's scared, he's ashamed of himself, etc. Lately I see him being less defiant than pre-hell Dean. Again: in my opinion.

But, I can see Dean looking up with his head hanging down, too. But that might just be Jensen working those eyes the way he does. ;)

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lynzibell April 8 2009, 02:10:16 UTC

Oh Dean!!! So good!!!! So sad!!!
Thanks for for sharing this!

ruinedlove April 8 2009, 02:10:51 UTC

Thank you! ♥

ewanspotter April 11 2009, 06:49:01 UTC

Oh, man, that ending is spectacularly creepy.

ruinedlove April 11 2009, 23:16:39 UTC

Thank you! ♥

potthead May 27 2009, 06:32:11 UTC

OMG I LOVED THIS. *__* The last line is SO POWERFUL! Dang, you're getting really great at squishing in a world of power into a tiny set of words! ♥

Shall be plugging my flist to this one, fyi. :)

ruinedlove May 27 2009, 07:13:14 UTC

AAAAAAAAACK! There isn't enough squee in the world for how excited I get when you love one of my fics! THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU. *___*

potthead May 27 2009, 07:14:48 UTC

Aww! XD But you know how much I love the dirty, gritty parts of any show/story, so this was precisely my cup of tea. It only helped matters when you wrote it so AWESOMELY. ♥

killmotion May 27 2009, 06:47:37 UTC

Whoa. I got chills. Creepy, and that's a good thing.

ruinedlove May 27 2009, 07:13:38 UTC

Thank you, Sarah! ♥